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Very nice. I like the wordplay of the title, where it can be read as 'I, Sinner' but also 'Ice, Inner' - like the world has made them cold. Great job... :)

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Thank you much. I must be honest and tell you that your wordplay angle never occurred to me at the time I wrote this. It was at a point when it would have been an apt description of its author. Now that I'm not such a bad ass I have brought it to light.

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Jan 11Liked by Carl R Williams

The struggle is real. That He would choose us in this war. . .Thanks Carl.

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